Doolittle's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aura]

This should have been alot better

The Guitare riffs at the begining are superb, i dont get why you felt the need to try and make i rocky so soon, if you have a longer build up (so long as it doesnt take the piss) it makes the contrast of the rocky section more musically satisfying. You should really re-rcord this as the whole bit in power chords is out of time with the drums and it could be excellent so its worth the hassle. Also i dont quite get whats going on with your mix things kept fading in an out when you should have got a sudden change or no change at all. If this is a problem because your only using a four track come up with a way of mixing everything down onto one track, if youve got a hi-fi at home that records onto tape use that. Also a change in key or chord progression would be good if your to lengthen out the piece. Any way I'll stop whining, you should re-record this it would be excellent if you did.

AndieCiambotti responds:

Well, thanks for the advice.
The truth is that this was my first song, done with crappy mp3 acoustica mixer, me on guitar and drums and I can't believe I have a score of 5/5.
Thanks everyone for voting! I sincerily didn't expect to actually have a better score that Alan, I can't believe that.

Thanks to everyone!

[The Woods of Deep Cove]

Good

I think this is really effective. The piano, string and voice midi is very cool + haunting, however the midi drums suck. Even so they need turning up in the mix. You should get someone to play the drum score for you, this is really good stuff and is probably worth the hassle.

Slayer-of-trolls responds:

Hah. You're like the 5th person to say that about the drums. I'd like to play this with a real drummer for sure. So we'll see... Thanks for the review!